Over the past few years we have all become concerned that our planet is
being polluted by human activity like cars and factories, producing terrible
effects.
It is true that nowadays factories and cars are essentials to our life:
Factories can produce much more products than people by hand
therefore these products are cheaper. On the other hand all this is causing
that people buy things without need them, and because of this our
resources will be finished in a near future if we do not do anything.
It is often thought that cars are the only way to go to work or to travel in
a long distance however we must take into account that there are public
transports which pollute less than cars.
It is a fact that our resources are being exhausted this meant that we must
try to use them correctly and also recycle so we will need less resources.
To sum up it seems to me that we must be careful about our actions in the
present because we will pay for them in the future.
Ana Sousa Ortega
The Full English Experience for FCE and CAE exams and how to get there from Upper Intermediate.
Ana this is basically fine, nicely set out argument. There are a few mistakes, see the marking scheme for more details, but be careful in the exam and check your work looking at singular, plural nouns, gerund or infinitive. Spend the ten minutes at the end of the writing exam doing this and you will be fine!.
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