Check out this essay by Antonio regarding diets for children. Look at the errors and refer to the marking guide (on the main toolbar of the blog, just next to 'How to use this blog'). Here it is below.
Parents
should let their children eat what they want.
If you start a discussion with that statement
surely you would get two clearly defines parts, children
part who said yes and parent
part who said no. But who is rigth and who is not? The importance of a well-balanced diet
has been remarked by a lot of experts
who said that it is the key for a good health.
The reason of why parents choose what children
have to eat is simple, because what do you prefer a recent
home made baked cookie or a cookie made by industrial way? I think is an easy choice, and I
hope everybody have
chosen the first option so the same happen with
any kind of food, parent prefer children
eat the home made food before the fast food because they know how it was made.
Other reason for not let children choose the
food is the fact they would not eat home made food because of they are not able to cook
it and in addition children are lazy, most of them, and personally I do not
trust they would cook any food as soon as they came back after a school day, furthermore
some children will be eating avery moment at the day and others won’t do it.
If at the end this essay works for something I think is for
getting a conclusion of it, and my own conclusion is that children do not know
the responsabilities of taking care of themselves for that fact parent have to choice
children foo however they have not to forget some days it is good to have
a breath and eat some unhealthy but
tasteful fast food.
Antonio Machado
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